So you finally took my advice about the shirts
Being in the graphic design industry, I'd say placing the Vortek name on the front of the shirt at the bottom is a bad idea. Goalies shirts tend to "ride up" in this area as we are always crouching over. You want to be able to see the Vortek brand name very clearly. This also goes for the name on the arms. The artwork looks good, but once the shirt in on top of a bulky C/A, the name will be scrunched up and hard to see clearly.
The version with the fangs on the front looks very cool, but I would reduce the size. Then I would place a large "V" in the center of the chest like on your customizer goalie. On the back I would have the VORTEK name reading across the bottom, but moved up slightly. You want to leave enough room for 12" numbers to be sewn on if so desired.
Just my 2 cents.
Smokey 32